Tough Love: Chapter 22
You definitely have the knack for writing. That's why I prefer comics, because I don't have much for writing ability. Keep going with the story! It's nice to see a more serious setting with those characters. The story is compelling and keeps me interested, especially when using characters whose personality traits are already known, it allows for a much better storytelling aspect without having to delve into a billion pages of character development. Another aspect that I admire is the original names used in this story. Naming new places and characters is not an easy task, especially with such unique names found here. I'm rooting for you!